Start your sentences with a capital letter every time, and capitalize the first person pronoun, "I." Don't use smileys instead of proper punctuation.
Your math is a bit off for heart strike. The 30% increase from diseases is applied to the total damage, so you would put the 1.3 on the outside of the parenthesis. Its only a difference of 204.3 damage, but I thought i'd point that out because i'm obnoxious like that Also you said in the guide that 2x heart strike is now less than 1x death strike, which while close isn't the case. in your own math above you show that 2x heart strike is still better than a single death strike after you count in the bonuses from disease damage for all levels of attack power (albeit not by much).