Infraction for Angelinalock: Mod Sass

• bartolimu · 06/06/09, 8:03 PM

User: Angelinalock
Infraction: Mod Sass
Points: 4

Administrative Note:

Message to User:

Your mother may have taught you how to be nice to people (though I can't tell from this little sample of vitriol), but unfortunately nobody in your life gave you any idea how to properly communicate. That much is clear by the amazing word misuse, abysmal spelling, and general incomprehensibility of the private message you saw fit to send me. Since I have a bit of time, let me take the mature route here and point out to you how you could better communicate.

1. "U" is not a word. The pronoun you were looking for was "you."
2. The first portion of your first sentence is missing an article. Between "are" and "arrogant" there should be "an."
3. Looser means more loose. I suspect you meant "loser." Ideally you should also have placed an article - probably "a" - before this word.
4. The "and" between life and "fell" makes little sense even with the next correction in the series. You should probably have used "who" or, less optimally, "that."
5. Fell is a past tense of "to fall." In the context of your PM it makes no sense; I would suggest you consider replacing it with "feels."
6. Just like "feels," the verb "play" should be conjugated "plays."
7. The final portion of your first sentence appears to be missing either a pluralization or an article. You could say either "play video games" or "play a video game." Either would be correct.
8. Line breaks between related sentences are unnecessary and make your post look choppy.
9. "For me is" - I'm not really sure what you intended with that phrase, but my best guess is you meant "I am."
10. "Ti" is a word corresponding to one of the notes of the polyphonic scale. "To" is a word used for a great many things; you should have used it here to indicate "see" was in the infinitive.
11. "Penitence" is a word that describes regretfulness, frequently used in religious context. While I do indeed show very little penitence for your mental plight, I believe the word you wished to use was "patience." If that is the case, you are wrong. I have nearly infinite patience when I choose to exercise it.
12. Your second sentence appears to be a run-on sentence. I would suggest more creative use of punctuation like the semicolon or comma, or perhaps revision of the sentence into two or more.
13. There should be an article between "with" and "stupid." "A" is the most likely candidate.

As you can see, you are quite incorrect about my ability to communicate. If anything, I have been gifted with an overabundance of such ability. You, on the other hand, stumble about like a drug-addled monkey on a malfunctioning typewriter, using words you either do not comprehend or are simply unable to spell. The end result of this tragedy is that you have shown up unarmed to a battle of wits. This is a shame, as I rather prefer a challenge.

Originally Posted by Angelinalock

U are arrogant idiot - probably looser in real life and fell good only when you lock your door and play video game.
For me is sorry ti see your parents did not teach you how to be kind and penitence and how to communicate with other people and now we need to deal with stupid idiot like you.

Have a nice day :-)